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Once

I once knew a girl,
A marvelous, wonderful, fantastic girl.
She told me to never look away.
I told her to never look back.
And I believed myself once.
But how can you never look back
When there is nothing to look forward to?
I once loved her.
I loved her so much.
And I still do.
So much.
But am I ready for this?
I once thought so.
But that was before I opened my eyes.
And now everything has to be considered.
I have to know if I am in love with her.
I want to be in love with her.
So much.
But to want and to know are two different things.
I can't make a mistake
Because I might hurt her.
And I would never be able to forgive myself.
It would be the biggest mistake I could ever make
But I now think I've already made that mistake.
If she is reading this
I want her to know
That this is all true.
I do love you.
So much.
But maybe it's best you should leave.
You'll be so much happier.
Leave the angel from Hell.
Be happy.
Find someone who you deserve.
Never look away.
Never look back.
Just remember that
I do love you.
So much.
And I just wish we could go back.
Back they way we were
Once.
i feel like i've taken a dagger in the heart. i hope you enjoy.
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:icongibsongirl211:
gibsongirl211 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2008  Student Writer
aww thats sad. =(
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:icondemonbarber:
demonbarber Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2008
yes. it was.
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TheWritingClub Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2008   Writer
wow...that read with a lot of emotion

I like it

good job!

you have a way with words

now I think I shall check out the rest of your writing

-~JesiMarie ( owner of ~TheWritingClub )
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:icondemonbarber:
demonbarber Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2008
i'm...touched! to say the least! thank you very much!
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Nutcase9 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008  Student General Artist
Reminds me of JtHM and Sweeney Todd . . .
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:icondemonbarber:
demonbarber Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008
kewl thanks! :D
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xXChibiDemonXx Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008
Awww! Thats so sad. Great Job. <3
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:icondemonbarber:
demonbarber Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008
:glomp: thanks.
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:iconxxchibidemonxx:
xXChibiDemonXx Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008
You're welcome! <3
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